tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1343874873578756990.post3585342579080283922..comments2013-01-30T09:33:05.870+00:00Comments on JessicaQ's Sci-Fi: KITE: The Beginning (Part2)Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1343874873578756990.post-36782068023425445872011-09-25T13:58:12.149+01:002011-09-25T13:58:12.149+01:00Btw... The pic of Maeve looking over her shoulder ...Btw... The pic of Maeve looking over her shoulder at the exhausted squad of grunts is Hot. I'm a sucker for redheads, although I'm not sure about one that I'd have to work that hard to excite. :PAvuknoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1343874873578756990.post-7997455999545151912011-09-25T13:51:31.492+01:002011-09-25T13:51:31.492+01:00@Jessica
I'm glad you liked it! There is mo...@Jessica<br /><br /> I'm glad you liked it! There is more to come. I'm anxiously waiting to see what happens next in here as well. <br /><br /> I enjoy your writing style, it's much cleaner than mine. I have to fight a tendency to get bogged down in details to the point of forgetting to advance the story. If you ever felt bored/generous enough to give me a more detailed review, fullytank knows how to reach me. Come to think of it, I wouldn't mind your input on some future Tiori stories he and I are concocting either. <br /><br /> In either case, keep up the good work. I'm fascinated by this dark world you are showing us.<br /><br />Be well,<br />AvukAvuknoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1343874873578756990.post-67850342767670561572011-09-24T22:37:02.825+01:002011-09-24T22:37:02.825+01:00HI There
Thank you both for the kind words.
I wi...HI There<br /><br />Thank you both for the kind words.<br /><br />I will try and include more pictures in future chapters and maybe also return to these to add more images.<br /><br />@avuk<br />Its lovely to see you here, i very much enjoyed your Tiori story.<br /><br />JessJessicahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00456987849475587582noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1343874873578756990.post-27367798402085863002011-09-22T21:28:35.963+01:002011-09-22T21:28:35.963+01:00I am enjoying the story very much. I managed to mi...I am enjoying the story very much. I managed to miss the first half until after part two was posted, So I got to read it as a whole. I like the characterization and variety among the squad, and the jarring contrast between the two simultaneous scenes was a nice touch. My vote goes to "more pics" as well, but the story is strong enough to stand on it's own. Visuals are purely icing on the cake. I'll be anxiously awaiting the next installment!Avuknoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1343874873578756990.post-41786443238191616962011-09-22T14:35:52.514+01:002011-09-22T14:35:52.514+01:00Hi There,
My intention is very much that after th...Hi There,<br /><br />My intention is very much that after the initial setting up of characters on the ship.<br /><br />That there will be 'encounters' with aliens of various kinds (including the alpha) on the planet.<br /><br />JessJessicahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00456987849475587582noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1343874873578756990.post-10522826665550999922011-09-22T12:38:57.561+01:002011-09-22T12:38:57.561+01:00Could you make your girls having sex with the alph...Could you make your girls having sex with the alpha creatures?munrahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08926202980829249242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1343874873578756990.post-49069513491489122102011-09-18T17:00:08.661+01:002011-09-18T17:00:08.661+01:00Hi There
Yes it's good to be back :)
I split...Hi There<br /><br />Yes it's good to be back :)<br /><br />I split the chapter in two in order to make it possible to add or revise content.<br /><br />So now ideas and suggestions are hugely appreciated and can be added without other content disappearing.<br /><br />JessJessicahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00456987849475587582noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1343874873578756990.post-40049573804418004602011-09-18T07:24:55.528+01:002011-09-18T07:24:55.528+01:00aaah, good news!you're finally back.you're...aaah, good news!you're finally back.you're story is well detailled.It need more pictures to illustrate the different scene.(i know i'm exigeant but it's for the goodness of your blogg)<br />CONGRATULATION for all the work.munrahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08926202980829249242noreply@blogger.com